topic: bycycling on trails.
thesis: It would be exciting to ride my bike on mountain trails.
conclusion: I’m going to bring my bike out here and ride the trails.

I. thesis
II. can go faster
a. dangers
b. takes skill
III. can go farther
a. explore mountainside
b. don’t need to carry a lot
IV. conclusion

I have a mountain bike, but I’ve never ridden it in the mountains. I think it would be exciting to bring my bike out here and ride these trails.

It would be much faster and more exciting than walking. I would need to be careful not to hit any rocks or cacti. It would take skill to follow the twists and turns of the trail.

I could go a greater distance on a bike than I could on foot. I could explore the whole mountain-side and wouldn’t even need to pack a lot of supplies like I would if I were walking.

I think it would be exciting to try riding my bicycle on these mountain trails. Next time I come out here I’ll remember to bring my bike.

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