Topic: What the food park needs?
Thesis: Want to know how to get more customers.
Conclusion:

I. Thesis
II. Troubling to see
III. Want to know how to fix it
IV. Conclusion

The food park hasn’t been doing very well business wise. We’re not getting enough customers. I wish I knew how to get more customers.

Maybe social media is the answer. Maybe we would get more customers if we took lots of pictures and posted them on social media.

Maybe Handing out paper flyers would be better than social media. We could go door to door and say hi and hand out the fliers.

I want to do something to bring more people out to the park. It is sad to see the park empty and all the food sellers discouraged.

Q. Some say it’s too risky to start your own business, and that it’s better to be an employee at a strong company. Which one is more right?
Q. Tell me something about going door to door.