Topic: old horse corral
Thesis: an old horse corral aroused my curiosity.
Conclusion: Old remains are very interesting.

I. Thesis
II. Looked at it
a. looks like
b. delapidated
III. Stood inside
a. why
b. beetle
IV. Conclusion

I saw the remains of an old horse corral while walking in the foothills. As soon as I noticed it, I went to look at it out of curiosity.

When I came to it, I walked around it and looked at it. It looked like a bunch of delapidated posts. The wood was rotten from years under the weather.

The posts formed a ring which must have been a full fence long ago. I found a gap in the fence and climbed into the ring. It felt like a separate place, like a room.

I saw an old horse corral and was curious about it. Old remains arouse my curiosity.

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